So I came up with some more ideas for WR2 :0 I prob won't be able to get on and discuss them much, but here's the gist:
I think that we should follow the scientists a bit more closely, cause I was thinking: WR followed around human characters, too, not just the wolves, and since the sciguys are important characters, too, it'd be good to have time to develop them more. The audience could grow to empathize with them more, like they did with Quent Yaden (sp?) from the original series and even Darcia--to a point.
Also, I think I loosely scriped out what's gonna happen to Delane, after a point, though further discussion would have to wait till maybe Sat, if I don't get off early [enough] today.
-Delane runs into Airi when he is [hiding? from the sci guys??] and watches over him [cause he reminds her of the other kid who fed her]. The mains find them, but Delane won't have it and cautiously stands her ground to protect Airi. [Rain?] attacks her/pins her down at first, but Airi protests and Demon connects with her and calms her down some. She's finally settled when she sees the wolves and Airi connecting and sees they won't harm him.
-She shows them where to get food when Demon asks and Airi helps convince her to lend them a hand. They stay in the city till they notice the scientists searching the city (?) with the "baddies" not far behind. Then, they leave the city to head for Paradise and escape the sciguys/baddies.
-Delane and the mains bond (each in their own way/time) and she's made more at ease by Airi trusting them, so she eventually trusts them to be around Airi without her worrying. After a while, the "baddies" catch onto her and Airi and the main's scents. The main group can hear the "baddies" howling to one another to communicate this news.
-The mains express their concern and as Airi seems to get worried, too Delane offers to take an article of his scent-laden clothing (cloak?) and lead the wolves away. The reactions to this idea are mixed, but in the end, she says she'll be fine and will be back in no time & that she can outrun them if they do get too close. She tells them, before she leaves, to wade through some water or something to get rid of their scents.
-Delane proceeds to back track and then tries to make a trail heading off elsewhere, but hte baddies catch up and cut her off before she can escape. Pinned down by one of them, they take the cloak, ask where the others went, and when no answers are given, they proceed to torture her for info (??).
-Eventually, they back off some (due to Osiris or another--Os?--saying she's hd enough nd won't speak). She tries to fight back, all the while throwing insults, and they get impatient and kill her after one of them says they can track her scent to the others. They leave her to bleed out, taking the bloodied cloak with them.
-Delane watches their blurred shapes move away as her vision fades and sees the main wolves [in the blurred shapes] instead of the baddies and wishes them luck in finding their paradise.
-After they catch up to the mains, one wolf (or sci guy?) holds up the cloak and the mains ask where tehy got it. Osiris (?) says they took it from a dog that got in the way. That makes the others angry (or whatever emotion they'd each feel) and Airi upset. During this emotional weakness, they are taken off guard and beaten, and Airi is taken and the Sci guys shoot at the mains to keep them back, if they weren't already injured badly enough in the fight. (??)
I think that we should follow the scientists a bit more closely, cause I was thinking: WR followed around human characters, too, not just the wolves, and since the sciguys are important characters, too, it'd be good to have time to develop them more. The audience could grow to empathize with them more, like they did with Quent Yaden (sp?) from the original series and even Darcia--to a point.
Also, I think I loosely scriped out what's gonna happen to Delane, after a point, though further discussion would have to wait till maybe Sat, if I don't get off early [enough] today.
-Delane runs into Airi when he is [hiding? from the sci guys??] and watches over him [cause he reminds her of the other kid who fed her]. The mains find them, but Delane won't have it and cautiously stands her ground to protect Airi. [Rain?] attacks her/pins her down at first, but Airi protests and Demon connects with her and calms her down some. She's finally settled when she sees the wolves and Airi connecting and sees they won't harm him.
-She shows them where to get food when Demon asks and Airi helps convince her to lend them a hand. They stay in the city till they notice the scientists searching the city (?) with the "baddies" not far behind. Then, they leave the city to head for Paradise and escape the sciguys/baddies.
-Delane and the mains bond (each in their own way/time) and she's made more at ease by Airi trusting them, so she eventually trusts them to be around Airi without her worrying. After a while, the "baddies" catch onto her and Airi and the main's scents. The main group can hear the "baddies" howling to one another to communicate this news.
-The mains express their concern and as Airi seems to get worried, too Delane offers to take an article of his scent-laden clothing (cloak?) and lead the wolves away. The reactions to this idea are mixed, but in the end, she says she'll be fine and will be back in no time & that she can outrun them if they do get too close. She tells them, before she leaves, to wade through some water or something to get rid of their scents.
-Delane proceeds to back track and then tries to make a trail heading off elsewhere, but hte baddies catch up and cut her off before she can escape. Pinned down by one of them, they take the cloak, ask where the others went, and when no answers are given, they proceed to torture her for info (??).
-Eventually, they back off some (due to Osiris or another--Os?--saying she's hd enough nd won't speak). She tries to fight back, all the while throwing insults, and they get impatient and kill her after one of them says they can track her scent to the others. They leave her to bleed out, taking the bloodied cloak with them.
-Delane watches their blurred shapes move away as her vision fades and sees the main wolves [in the blurred shapes] instead of the baddies and wishes them luck in finding their paradise.
-After they catch up to the mains, one wolf (or sci guy?) holds up the cloak and the mains ask where tehy got it. Osiris (?) says they took it from a dog that got in the way. That makes the others angry (or whatever emotion they'd each feel) and Airi upset. During this emotional weakness, they are taken off guard and beaten, and Airi is taken and the Sci guys shoot at the mains to keep them back, if they weren't already injured badly enough in the fight. (??)
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